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Review:RebekahPotter says:
THIS STORY!
I'm not even ashamed to say that I just binge read this whole thing all day, taking an unrealistic amount of washroom breaks at work just so I could keep reading... Please update soon! This is amazing! It's like 2 in the morning and I work at 6 so I'll make it quick, I love where this is going, I figured that breaking the rules would make it back to her somehow, and I'm really happy with how you're bringing everything together. I also really appreciate how deliberate you are with every scene you include, they all serve a purpose which makes me happy because it's hard to read when the author just adds random scenes all the time that has no point to furthering the plot (which you don't do, so YAY) also, I just want to take a moment to appreciate Fred and how great he is all the time especially just with inviting her on the train to sit with them and back when he was talking the her in the skating shack. Despite the fact that he's in no way a main character, he's probably one of my favorites... I was curious, are we ever going to hear from him how James is different now that he knows Seth? I suppose it's not incredibly relavent but it would be interesting to know, to keep up with learning about James as a character... Anyways! I really enjoy your writing, and I'll be checking back regularially to see if it's been updated :)

Author's Response: I'M SO SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO RESPOND!!! I was on holidays and there was no wifi near or far :( I feel terribly terribly bad for leaving this lovely review sitting all by itself for so long :( I hope you can forgive me.

I can't even tell you how much your review means to me. It's so amazing to get such great feedback and that you took the time even though you're super busy.

I'm glad you like where the story is going... I was working towards that twist and I'm glad it worked out :) ALso, I love Freddie too and I promise there will be more scenes with him ;)

I'm working on the update but there has been some delay due to holidays and work and life stuff but it's in production :)

Thank you thank you thank you once again for the review and I hope you can forgive my late reply. Your words really made me very hapy!


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