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Review:Anna says:
I have a confession... I am obsessed with your fic! Life is super crazy for me right now and this fic is my happy place :). I keep it open on my tablet to read during my long commute. I've read it many times so far. I think that your character development is phenomenal. I feel as if I actually know the characters and can relate to them more and more as the story progresses.
In terms of the poisoning, I'm wondering if it has anything to do with that dodgy head boy that came when Seth was monitoring detention. I always wondered if that would play a part anywhere... And I can't imagine that James was the one to snitch on Seth, but maybe Felicity... She's the only one I could think of.
I'm excited to see how the James/Seth relationship develops. I know that James can be a prat sometimes, but I believe his heart is in the right place and he seems like someone who would do anything for the people he cared about. I could be wrong but I feel as if Seth, more than James, would be the hesitant one in committing to a relationship.
You are such a talented writer! You really make the story come alive! Looking forward to the next update :).

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH ANNA! You literally just made my day :) I am so happy to know that you feel that way about the story, honestly. I put a lot of effort into it and to know that it makes someone somewhere happy is just amazing. So thank you for that!

I am glad you bring up the headboy... I haven't forgotten about this bit... it's all part of the plan ;). I love that you don't suspect James... He might be a bit of a prat but he is not an evil mastermind :)

Can I just say that I am SO glad that you see James this way... I know it's hard to get the gist of a character when you're writing in the POV of another one, but you really get him and I'm super happy. And YES, definitely... it's not only James who makes this whole relationship complicated... it's just as much Seth's fault... she's incredibly stubborn and proud and, you're right, she can't really see herself in a relationship and feeling these odd things like jealousy and heartache and crying because of a boy; well, she just doesn't know how to handle that

Thank you so much again! You are seriously amazing and its readers like you how motivate me and remind me that someone is waiting to hear the end of the story. I can't even tell you how much that means to me.

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