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Review:Michael Bell says:
First, welcome back. It is wonderful to have your vision in another story. I am enjoying the start. A little more opening exposition that I might expect, but you do have to write backwards and forwards for a bit and I recognize that. What appealed to me most in the Chinese Book was your skill with dialogue. You have the voices down and that is a great thing. Cannot wait for more. Well I can and will, but thanks for taking on another story line.

Author's Response: Michael,

Thank you for taking the time to write. You're right, of course, I do need to wander about the scenery before I can get going. In the case of “Grand Trine,” where I am trying to bring a story out of the day-to-day mundane, Grimmauld Place seemed like another character. As that it let me play with ideas like “magical space," the magic of transforming it.

There'll be lots of dialog starting with Touch & Talk the chapter I just posted. I've paid a lot of attention to the phrases introducing dialog as chances to shade the emotional content.

Thank you,all the chapters are written, I'll post them as I get the proofing a bit better. I hope not to disappoint.

Bill


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