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Review:alicia and anne says:
Aw I love that comparison with her eyes and the cliff fear! :D

These descriptions are so wonderful! I love how you're describing the colour of her eyes to forests, and the ocean...It makes his feelings for her sound even move intense. I can just picture the love the he has for her and it's making me smile so widely!

You can just tell how much she means to him, and it's because you've done an amazing job at writing it. :D

THEY NEED TO KISS!!!

No! it's been ruined! Fix it James!

Oh those two are so cute! They have feelings for each other and they're being all adorable about it! Look at those crazy two! I just want to hug them in a group hug of love! :D

So fluffy!

This has given me the biggest smile on my face! And I'm so glad that you wrote this :D I'm so happy right now because of their love!

Author's Response: Welcome back!!!
Have I already said how awesome you are? Yes, I think I did...

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked metaphores for her eyes! And that they helped giving the measure of his love for her. That's what I was trying to do! :D

Ahahah! James isn't too clever when it comes to Lily... but he can fix it! ;)

Ah, yes! They are super cute!!! And they do love each other!!! :) Ah, yes! Go hug them! Snowball hug coming!!! *yahoo*

It's great to know that this made you happy! I guess you needed some fluff after all the angst you probably endured during the Review a thon, right? ;)

Thank you for another amazing review! *wub*
Chiara


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