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Review:PaulaTheProkaryote says:
Hey there!

Thank you for the lovely shout out! I can't even begin to tell you how happy I was to see another chapter up!

Even though this chapter is dialogue heavy, I think it was very necessary and I still enjoyed it. I don't think you really need to add anything.

I really liked the insight into Cormac's home life and even though I'm sure he loves going home to see all of the children and his family, I imagine it must be very stressful every time he is there. He's so very sweet with his siblings. ALSO, WHY IS HE BEING SUCH A SNOT? I'm dying to know! I'm sure we will get more detail in the next chapter so I'm hanging on by the seat of my pants (I'm not sure if that's the phrase exactly, but you know what I mean)! Complete side note, I love the names you picked out for Cormac's family because they are exactly the unpronounceable accurate names they should be (at least to me. I'm terrible with names though).

Eloise and Wayne! Well, they are both very practical about it at least! I'm a firm believer that someone always catches feelings though so I'm worried about that whole scenario. Maybe not though. I'm hoping not.

Overall, I loved the chapter and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one! I hope to see it up soon!

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