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Review:Kristina1990 says:
Heya!

I've spent a couple of days now reading the whole story from first to last chapter and I love it! The story is entirely addicting and it's hard to turn away if there is a follow-up chapter waiting for you ;).

If I compare your writing style from the fiest chapters to now, it is really impressive how much you have improved - from characterisation to style and grammar, it has come a long way. It's so easy and fluent to read now.

I also like the slow build up of the story and the character development. Seth is a strong one, but she is fighting against the impossible expectations of a family who certainly love her in their own way, but cannot understand her even if they tried (with the exception of the grandfather who seems to try to go along with it before losing her). It will be interesting to follow her in the next months to see how their relationship will develop.

I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey Kristina! I'm glad you found and liked the story! And thanks for the compliment - I usually put my best effort into my chapters, re-writing them over and over again, I'm glad you feel that the chapters have gotten better :)

It's really good to hear that you like the slow pace of the story... I know its uncommon for fanfiction and I have been told to speed it up before, which I really don't want to... so I am really really happy that you feel the same way :)

I'm also glad to hear that you like Seth and her character development. I also feel that she's getting stronger ;). There is definitely room for some more development, though... she'S still too proud and stubborn for her own good :)

THank you so much for the lovely long review and for reading. It means a lot to me to get such feedback!


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