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Review:victoria_anne says:
OHHH MYYY MEEERLIN I love this so much!!

Hi Chiara! ♥

So you start off with a line from one of my favourite songs and I'm already in love with this story ♥

The point of view is such a good choice too. I think the beginning of Lily and James' relationship can be so hard to write sometimes, but this is definitely one of the better ones that I've read! Especially since we're so deep in James' head at first. I think you captured his nervousness really well. Lily's attitude too, especially the part where she gets annoyed at James not accepting a compliment.

The whole thing just felt real after a first kiss - I love it so much! The way Lily sees herself in the mirror is also painfully real, but her reaction to how she sees herself after kissing James is just beautiful.

OH AND THAT SECOND KISS! Arghhh just so good! I knew you could write Marauders ah-maze-ingly but this was just so so so good!!

Really, a beautiful story, my beautiful friend ♥

B xx

Author's Response: Hi Bianca! Shake-what?

Ahahah! I love that song too!

Aww... wow... thank you... *blushing* I'm so glad you felt this way!

I love James, he's just so full of love!!! And his nervousness is so endearing, isn't it? And Lily's temper is always so much fun to write!!! :D So glad you think I captured them well!!!

Ah, the mirror bit! So glad you loved that too! You see yourself in a different light when there is a special someone in your life, right?

Aww... Thank you! So, so, so much!!! You know I adore your feedback!!!

All my love, and some more!
Chiara


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