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Review:princesslily_36 says:

When you first told me you were working on this, I got so excited! I didn't know you had got so far along until yesterday!!!

The opening passage was just brilliance. I loved the imagery it created, but what cinched it for me was how very James Potter the whole thing was! The Quidditch reference and the Forbidden Forest all screams Prongs!

I love how the passages flow from references to the colour to their expression, it's just seamlessly done.

And comparing her attitude towards him and Snape was a lovely touch - it showed exactly how insecure he could be, beneath all his arrogant exterior!

Poor James, why did Lily suddenly yell at him for no reason? He wasn't even being annoying :(

Cue, incoherent gushy squeeing!

AW... James Potter is just so adorable, the way he feels about her, and how he is so dejected that she doesn't feel the same way... and the things he tells her...

Aw, pulling him by the tie to kiss him is my favorite headcanon for Jily, and you managed to write that *sque*

And Lily's PoV was just as perfect if not more. I love that you've brought in her insecurities about herself and her looks - like every normal teenage girl would feel... and the fact that she's fancied him for long but let her own insecurities get in her way... so lovely!!

OMG *sniffs* The A/N... just made me feel so warm!! I love you too dear beta/betee/best HPFF friend. You make my day so much brighter! This is honestly the best way to start my Sunday, and thank you so much for the dedication, and for writing something so brilliant that I'm probably going to reread a million times!

~XOXO forever

Author's Response: Aww, Ysh!!! *hug* *wub* *hug* *wub* *hug* *wub*
Actually, most of the story was already written when the challenges came out. But then, for some reason, I started to doubt it and I felt stuck and I sort of forgot... But when you told me you were working on something for me, I decided I needed to get back to this! And I'm so happy I did!!!

Ah, I'm so happy you felt that way about the first paragraph! I wanted to make it the most James I could! :D I'm quite sure that's what he would see in her eyes!

Also, it's a relief to know the transactions were smooth. It's something I struggle with a lot...

Ahahah! James can be very insecure... Especially when it comes to Lily... And I'm quite sure he's always been jealous of Snape just as much as Snape has been jealous of him! :D

I know... he didn't deserve the yelling (this time). I guess she was just frustrated that he seemed not to take her seriously...

He is adorable!!! *squeezes James in snowball hug* I love the way he feels for her!!!

Ahahah! Well, you know I love your headcanon!!! :P

So glad you liked Lily's POV as well and that her insecurities felt authentic and relatable! It's a huge relief to know her section worked as well!

Aww... I will always love you, little betee!!! So happy I made you happy!!!

Much love,

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