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Review:Startafire says:
Hello there!

I'd like to start of this chapter by saying I really like the way you structured this one shot. It was short but sweet and you really did compact it with as much detail as possible, this I applaud you on as you done it very well.

I'm very curious about Melinda, she seems like an interesting OC and if you were to explore her further then I would definitely read it!

Now the plot of this oneshot was really quite tragic. My heart went out to Ted for the pain and loss he had to be put through and to forget all about his family? that's horrible! you really have a way of connecting the reader to your characters!

The ending was perfect yet eerie. That last line made me shudder and want to know more!

Brilliant job and wonderful read!
Ella

Author's Response: Thank you for such a sweet review, Ella! So many are curious about Melinda. I hope to soon write about her. I'm glad you liked the story! - June

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