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Review:Claire Evergreen says:
*hides behind couch* Okay, so I know that we agreed to swap ages ago (weeks at least, I have no clue anymore), but I am just horrifically bad at getting anything done, so I am just now getting here and I am so so so so so sorry that it's taken so long.

Anyway, you already know that I love this story completely and there's very little that's going to persuade me otherwise, but I'll say it again. I absolutely love the premise you have set up for this story. Seeing how all of these insanely talented and competitive kids interact within the school is going to be so cool!

Okay, so this part is going to get really rambly, but bear with me. I think you've absolutely nailed the way each person on the team interacts with each other. I do IHSA, which is horseback riding in college, and it's pretty similar to what you have set up here. We're a team, but we compete as individuals to get our points, which is a lot like the Oakshaft kids playing on a team, but essentially competing for spots on professional teams. You nailed the tensions between teammates beautifully. I know that we all try to support each other, but there are times when I just really wanted to show or my friend beat me by one placing and knocked me out of year end awards. I obviously supported them, but there was that little bit of me that was upset. You've really set that up well and I can't wait to see where you take it!

Lo, you have me torn. I had already pegged Cedric as the one that I'm going to fall in love with and then you have to go and introduce Reid? Come on, now, don't do this to me. But seriously, you have the best characterizations ever. This is such a large ensemble cast, but you pull it off beautifully. Everyone is so fleshed out already. There's no way that I would already be struggling with who I love more or who to ship Molly with (I think I'm going to stick with Cedric/Molly, but I wouldn't be opposed to a little Reid/Molly first :P) if your writing wasn't as fantastic as it was.

This is so good, Lo! I can't wait to check out the edited chapters as soon as I get the time :)

Claire

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