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Review:Felpata Lupin says:
THIS IS SO GREAT!!! LOVED, LOVED, LOVED IT!!!
I love the way you wrote the Marauders! They are all just... them! Each and every one of them! LOVED IT!!!

Poor Remus... you wrote the dread of the wait so beautifully. It broke my heart and it made me catch my breath in anticipation...
I could really feel his anguish. It's so sad but also so beautiful! And yes, knowing what's going to happen to him in a handful of seconds, knowing he has no mean to escape it and that he just has to endure it all... poor boy... :'(

But then the other three arrived, and Sirius opening his mouth it's all it takes to get a good laugh out of me! "We, being the geniuses we are..." I love it!!! :D

I loved every bit of it. Remus' panic, his useless protests, James and Sirius' cockiness, Peter's nervousness!!! Just great!!! :D

And then the waking up! And Remus' protests again. I loved when Peter repeated "But we did" even before Remus could finish. And then the first thought was food! Ah, Petey...

And I loved the nicknames part! And James' parents worrying because he and Sirius were too quiet! Great! Just great!

I know I already told you, but I love your sense of humour, and this was super funny and I adored it!!!

Thank you so much for swapping and for suggesting this story! You are awesome, my beautiful Sophie!

Tons of love,
Chiara

Author's Response: Well that's totally made my day!! I'm so glad you liked it. I absolutely adore writing the marauders all together. I just know that Sirius and James would be cocky about it, even though they know that Remus is scared and anxious.

I think it's the first time I've really written about one of his transformation like that- I don't think I've gone passed going to the shack and leaving it before so in that way it was a challenge.

I did start with them already using the nicknames until I realised they wouldn't have had them until after this point. But I did like the idea of James and Sirius trying to get around James' parents with their enforced silence, bless them.

Thank you so much for r&r ing. I totally loved your story too!

Lots of love and hugsm, lovely

Soph x


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