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Review:PaulaTheProkaryote says:
I had every single intention of reviewing this chapter by chapter. Then I got completely sucked into the story.

You haven't updated in months (at all this year) and I'm sure you're busy with your other WIPs...BUT YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!

I have to know more! I love Eloise. She's probably the best OC of all time. ALL TIME. She is so complex and interesting and slightly flawed which makes her even stronger of a character.

You really bring out Cormac's charm without breaking his character. He's a big, fat, whiny baby but he's also got another side that Harry never bothered with so of course we never saw it in canon. I love, love, love your characterization of him.

All of your Hufflepuffs are brilliant. They each have their own personality and feel very realistic.

I also adore the way you've intertwined canon so flawlessly in your story. This really feels like the bits we didn't get.

So, overall, I love your story and I'm not too proud to beg that you continue it. SERIOUSLY. I promise I'll review incessantly and you'll be happy and I'll be happy and we will all be happy, but you just can't leave it on that kind of cliffhanger! What is wrong with Cormac? Is he jealous? Maybe it has to do with Hermione? I don't know, but I need to know!

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