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Review:NPE says:
Hi Kaitlin,

Well done for trying the "Epistolary" format.

This captures the essence of how I suspected Ted and Andromeda would have spoken. Concise, direct and not trying to give too many details away. Thus I like the style of the letters a lot here.

This is emotionally quite galling and I think you have structured it and kept it consistent to the canon in a really effective manner.

I don't have any CC, but I have a question about the books that may interest you as it sort of relates to this.

This isn't CC but more of a critique of Tonks and always a slight nagging issue I have with the potterverse...

In terms of scale, Voldemort was ascendant in Britain and maybe had influence in Europe. The reality is if Ted had apparated to America or Australia, he probably wouldn't have a problem. Ok - I doubt he has connections outside of Britain but it'd be better than dying. I don't mention this as a critique of your story in any way, but I am interested in what you think about that?

Best,
Nick

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