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Review:Amanda, your biggest fan x says:
WHOA! Why these gosh durn cliffhangers!? Wonderful story thus far! I am thoroughly enjoying learning more about your characters slowly but in a realistic fashion. They're like my new friends almost: just as I wouldn't learn everything about a real friend immediately, I am also not learning everything about your characters. Beautifully executed, by the way!

Question: why is it that everything in quotations is italicized?? Also, I know that Draco married Astoria. Then, there was Daphne Greengra$$. In your fic, is there a Greengra$$ brother!? And if Elisa (a$$uming she is also "Pandora") has a Muggle father and Pansy Parkinson as a mother... Why did Pansy attack Rose!? Pansy has apparently sullied her pure-blood lineage... Why the hypocrisy?? WHY THE CLIFFHANGER!? Fix this!!

Best wishes!!
Xx-

Amanda

Author's Response: Hihi, all these questions I can't answer just yet ... :D
As for the italics everytime someone says something, I started it to clarify some things for myself, and it just kind of stuck... I hope it isn't too annoying when reading. Or if there's anything else you spot throughout the story that doesn't quite make sense, let me know!
Love that you're enjoying the story and its characters so far, despite its many cliffhangers :D
And thank you so much for reviewing, it means the world!

Lots of love and hopefully until next time!
QuillRune


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