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Review:Felpata Lupin says:
Here with your requested review!

This isn't something I would usually read, I must confess, but I did enjoy what you did with this couple! :)

I liked Draco's POV. I liked the fact that he is so honest with his feelings. How you highlighted the differences between who he pretended to be for the family name's sake and who he really is. I also really liked that he admitted to be jealous of Harry (or should I say, to admire him?)

I must confess, the break up with Ginny didn't convince me 100%. After waiting for him for all that time, she just leaves because she can't stand the stress of celebrity? Not like her. But maybe I'm biased because I'm a strong Hinny shipper...

I did enjoy the muggle boy reference. That must be the greatest dishonour for a "respectable" pureblood child! I can't believe Draco just confesses it to his arch-enemy so adamantly. But I suppose it was one of those moments you just need to spit it out, otherwise you might explode.

One CC I need to give is to pay attention to tenses. You switch a lot between past and present, which is a side effect of first-person perspective, I believe. But you should stick with one or the other and not mix the two. ;)

Anyway, this was a cute story. I had fun reading it. Thanks for sharing. :)


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