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Review:Marshal says:
For the HPFF Review-A-Thon

Hi, I'm Marshal (obviously). I am a member of the forums and as you can see from the phrase above we are doing a review-a-thon. There are some super generous people donating money to keep this site alive for every review that is left over this weekend. Also I'm from the Slytherin house where we are hosing an in house review competition to spread some snake love.

I know the story here has just started and you haven't deviated from canon just yet but I love how you've captivated what may have actually happened even in canon when Ron ran away from Harry and Hermione. I love how Bill is encouraging Ron to do a segment on Potterwatch. I know it wasn't mentioned in the books him doing that but it still makes a ton of sense that he would either way. That also includes your exploration of Ron's feelings after he left. While the story intent is to go AU some I still love how what you have thus far could be taken as canon which leans to a very credible start to the story. I always feel it is good to mix at least a bit of canon into an AU fic.

Also you did a very nice job with Fluer's accent. So many people over do it or just ignore it. Accents are not easy to handle and you did a nice job with it so kudos to you! Over all, good job!


- Marshal
Team Ouroboros
"The end is only the beginning"

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