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Review:Jayna says:
For the HPFF Review-A-Thon!

Hey there Lo, I'm here for our review swap (I'm pretty sure. I guess I signed up for way too many review swaps before going to bed and now I can't remember who I have swaps with and who reviewed me because I posted a link on their status. Anyway...)

Okay, so I'm kind of sad that this story only has two chapters so far because I can already tell that this is going to be one of those stories that I just can't put down (or close the tab on or whatever :p), so I'll definitely be back once I review everybody else who I owe a review to. So anyway, I don't really have any CC, so I'll just list some of the things I liked about this story.

First of all, you did a brilliant job of getting all the set up into this chapter. I mean, we've gotten to know the MC, we know the cast of supporting characters, and we know the setting. To me that means that this story is going at a really good pace. In addition to that, your flow is AMAZING. It is to be coveted and studied until everyone can write with flow like yours. I think those two things combined are a huge part of what make this feel like the first chapter of a novel I would get from the library or something.

In addition, I also thought that setting this story at a wizarding school of your own creation was really creative. In addition, from what we've seen of this school so far, it seems richly imagined and it's interesting to think that the wizarding world has the same kinds of sports institutes as we do.

Anyway, great job overall, I loved seeing Cedric Wood, and I can't wait to follow Molly through this entirely new kind of magical school. :)

-Jayna

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