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Review:Gail Welin says:
Hi Marshal!

I'm back for more and this time, it's also for the HPFF REVIEW-A-THON! :D

Thirteen long years ago, James accepted his fate - being stuck living as Remus, who had died in his place with Lily. And now he gets to see his son again - but can never tell the truth. This is so horribly twisted and evil. I'm loving it! ♥
I love that it makes sense James would still be alive to demand that the cloak be gifted to Harry (you are messing with my brains again!)

You have a had/has situation here: "He knew what Dumbledore has asked" ;)

James being Remus gives Sirius' escape from Azkaban a whole new way to spread chaos and more confusion - it's great! I'm remembering the time Sirius and Remus meet again in the Shack o when Remus meets Severus again! There are so many ways to make James being Remus believable, it's exhilarating!
I can't repeat enough how great I think this plot is; the moment you make me think that it could've been that way is a clear win for you (that's twice in this chapter, hehe). I mean, I already hurt for James and want to punch Dumbledore for calmly calling him Remus like that - he's right, it'd be madness to even try and tell the truth now, it's way too late. But still, ouch.
I'm starting to look forward to James meeting Tonks and letting himself fall in love again (then my heart break when I remember how Remus didn't want to be in a relationship and how they die anyway).

Darn those feels!


Author's Response: Gee!

I am forever in responding to this reivew. I am glad you like this so much and I am crafting a believable situation. I have been working very hard to keep things in character and have everything make sense and be believable. You have no idea how many flags are in my copy of POA so I can be as accurate as possible.

I think the evil and horrible twists of the emotions is why I love this plot. I'm glad the feels are being hit. That is my favorite part of writing as a whole getting the feels or making the brain explode.

I will have to go back and address the typo here in the near future. As for James/Tonks. I don't know if I'll write that far or not. Part of me would like to write it another part of me is scared to because that would be quite the undertaking. I might end things at POA and then do off shoot one shots of this universe.

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