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Review:Owlpost68 says:
Hi, I'm writing this for the Review-a-thon... and 'cause I would have anyway lol.
I know you feel like nothing happens in it, but don't worry too much, it's really important to have the chapters that describe "normal" life. Especially that everything is far from perfect, but that at least the love is and that's what gets us through each day. There were a few mistakes I caught, but nothing huge:
"she could head the sound of water boiling"--Hear.

"With a shriek, she span around"-- spun.

Again, nothing huge, but enough that I found them :P I know about being too busy to update a story, I've done it for years and wonder if people still care, but when I posted a new one I've had 70 reads on it, so it's definitely encouraging. Plus, this is such an established story I don't think people will STOP reading just 'cause you were busy :P It's so good, you really paint the picture and weaved the Potter's scenes so well with the Weasley's. I actually loved the moment between Ron and Hermione, it was so bittersweet and lovely.
Great job!
-Heather

Author's Response: Hi! i am so happy that you still liked this slow-pace chapter. You are right, life is never going to be perfect for anyone, but as long as you've got people you love and who love you, you will get by.

Thank you for pointing out those mistakes! I'll make sure to fix them when I go back and edit this. I do know what you mean - sometimes I expect to have zero reads because it's been so long, but it's amazing to see that some people stick with the story anyway. I am so happy you liked this and the way it switches between the different characters. it's really important to me to get that right so it doesn't feel awkward, so I'm really, really happy you liked it. And the Ron and Hermione moment too! Thank you, as always, for being so lovely to me, and for reading and revieiwng!! Xx


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