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Review:princesslily_36 says:
FOR THE HPFF REVIEW-A-THON

Olivia, You had a Jily up! I HAD TO come over!

Ohh yaay, it starts in 7th year! Lily already seems to have noticed that James has become a little mature. PLUS, she seems to be getting that hearty-racey thingie of a new-found attraction. Awww!

Was he nervous, by any chance? - When Lily thought this I felt like yelling at her 'Of course he's nervous you silly girl, he's been in love with you for ages!'

Shall I say how I ADORE that you have decided to keep Sirius the same (because I would literally break if the Marauder pranking had to die off!)

Also the ending - LOVELY! I mean, Lily turning a blind eye to their pranks - marks a turning point for her too. I love how you have shown thatt it was not only James who changed for her, but she too relaxed a bit around him once she started liking him. Most fics portray her to be perfect, and their influence on each other to be one sided...but I like this :D

Over to the next chapter now!

XOXO
~Ysh

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