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Review:Marshal says:

I've been dropping by stories of people I don't think I've seen on the HPFF forums as part of a Slytherin house reviewing competition. I don't think I've seen you around on the forums and if are a member there be sure to stop by my profile and say hi.

Anyway this is an interesting start to the story. I think the magical option for unwanted pregnancies versus the muggle way is interesting. I wasn't expecting you to do something like that and it is neat. I also really like Aleksander as a character he is charming and unique.

Over all, I can tell that you have put a lot of thought into this story and you have created a lot of detail and a world while still in the HP verse that is uniquely your own. Anyway best of luck to you in your writing!

- Marshal
Team Ouroboros
"The end is only the beginning."

Author's Response: Hi Marshal,

Thanks for taking the time to read the beginning of my story! I'm currently not a member of the forums but I've thinking about visiting it so I'll be sure to drop you a message when I do. :) I've heard of multiple competitions and I'd like to see what some of them are and possibly enter one.

You're really kind. Thank you, again. I wanted my main character to have a different background and I'm glad everyone's been receptive to her story, including the pregnancy and how she decided to handle everything.

Have a lovely week! :)

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