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Review:merlins beard says:
Hey, I'm here for the BvB.

I feel like I was reading only the song. Everything fit in so well, you used lots of lyrics in between and it all tied together perfectly. I love the description and the way you managed to make me almost pity Snape. I usually don't read Snape stories because in my opinion it's really, really hard to do him justice, to capture all the emotional struggle along with the unpleasantness and plain hatred for pretty much everything fun or beautiful. That man is so destroyed, he's pretty much unpredictable. I think you managed to capture the anguish, the pain, the way severus detests what he had become very well, but I was missing his unpleasant attitude a bit. I know it probably wouldn't fit the song, but Snape needs a snide comment here and there to feel like the guy we know and love/hate (never really sure which one). That being said, congrats to coming third in the challenge, it's totally deserved! I really enjoyed reading this.

♥ Anja

Author's Response: I Anja. Thanks for your review. Writing Snape was really hard. He's such a complex character and I didn't know if I could pull it off and keep him in canon. The song just seemed to fit him so well though that I took on the challenge. I'm really glad that you think I captured all those emotions in him. You're right that their isn't any of his charactersitic snide comments in this story. I guess his mind in this moment is filled with the deed he knows he has to do but really doesn't want to do. Thanks for stopping by.

Jacqui


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