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Review:Anon says:
Well, firstly I'm really sorry about what happened to your bf and I truly hope he gets better soon! Glad things are looking up though :)

Ok, so I need to talk about this chapter! I LOVE IT SO MUCHH seriously, it was so good and totally worth the wait. I love how you made Seth react to all of it. Idk but it seems like she took it as a chance to be rebellious and do things she normally wouldn't. Like the James thing.. I don't think Seth - in her right mind - would show up at his house and sleep with him and I guess that's why James didn't let it happen.

I know this made things awkward for them and etc but can you please promise that there'll be more james/seth on the next chapter? Hahahaha I just love their interactions!! And btw, Seth/Vala moments are also my faves!! They had a cute cousin bond in the other chapter and I loved it. Missed Katie and Sam but the Woodleys are as always very interesting to read about! Can their verdict not be so awful? ;)

Anyways it was a great chapter! This story always gets me sooo excited for what's next and you're doing a wonderful job!!! Any ideas of when you'll update? Hopefully soon ❤❤❤

Lots of love!

Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to reply! Thank you so much for your lovely words! I really appreciate them!

I'm so glad you liked the chapter! And also that you're not too upset about the long wait ;) And you're right, Seth would definitely NOT do all of these things if she had been in her right mind. She starts regretting them as soon as they happened, but even the most responsible kids have to let out their stupid inner teenager at some point, don't they? I guess I just felt like Seth would feel trapped in her own life, her own boundaries and she simply snapped... And James, yes he has done the gentlemanly thing but let'S not give him too much credit just yet ;)

There will definitely be A LOT more James/Seth scenes in the upcoming chapters. After all it's a kinda love story of sorts... with a lot of other things going on :). And I'm so glad that you like Vala and Seth...they kind of mirror that back and forth between Seth and James :). And I miss Katie too but she will be back next chapter, I promise!

I'm so excited that you're excited for what's next. I can promise that this was only the beginning... I am working on the update as much as I can but I can't make any predictions to when it will be up. I do promise, however, that I will try to be quicker this time :)

Thanks so much again for that amazing review. It really really means a lot to me and you are fantastic! :)


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