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Review:Yaya says:
OMG. You are ridiculous. Ridiculous in a wonderfully amazing way.

First, and most importantly, I'm wishing your boyfriend a very speedy recovery. I'm sorry you two have to go through that and I truly wish you all the best.

Now, your story. Gosh, I adore it! Everytime you update, I'm so excited! Usually, I like to save new chapters from my favorite stories for bedtime or early in the mornings but when you update I HAVE to read immediately. I always have similar reactions: "This chapter is so hilarious/mysterious/dramatic! It's my favorite! How is she going to top this?" And then you top it! Every. Single. Time.

I'm loving the character development of Seth. Her rebelling against her family, the rules she sets for herself, and the LAW is amazing. What a journey! It reminds me of the journey of hermione a little bit. Yet, you've made Seth's journey so authentic and so original.

I'm loving James's character development too. We don't know everything that's going through his head but I'm guessing that the James at the beginning of this story wouldn't have stopped himself from hooking up with a half-naked Seth. I think we are seeing James slowly mature and I love it.

I also love how you make me hate/love Vala! I still don't trust her but she's honestly growing on me.

Your characters' reactions are so authentic. I love how awkwardly cute Seth is when she interacts with James. I appreciate how awkward their first semi-sexual encounter is. It's just so real! I think James stopped himself because Seth was drunk (?) And while that's certainly the right thing to do, Seth's reaction is believable and relatable.

I basically love everything about your story! Sorry for not reviewing more often!! Usually when I read your chapters, I'm at work (oops!) and I have to get back to whatever I am doing right after I finish reading. But after reading this yesterday, I made a note to make sure I review finally.

Love it! Keep up the amazing writing ;)

Author's Response: First of all, thanks for your lovely words, they really mean a lot!
And I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the story in general :). It'S so amazing to get such feedback and your review makes me very happy!

And yes, I think you're right about James.. he has developped too... of course, we can only see him through Seth's eyes and she's not aware of it at all ;)

Ah and Vala, she is one of my favourites... I'm glad you feel that way about her... Seth does not trust her completely but she also does not feel as though Vala would want to harm her in any way. They are growing closer as cousins but there is still something between them that slows down the process...

I'm so glad you think that my characters' reactions are authentic. Especially with sexy or romantic scenes I always try to keep it real and not make everything too smooth and fluffy... because it really never is, is it? Looking graceful and sexy when undressing and rolling around in bed only ever looks good in movies :') And you might be on to something with James and his reasons for rejecting her ;). I agree that it was the right thing to do.. she was still slightly drunk and also, she was acting the way she did for all the wrong reasons...

It's fine that you don't review every chapter. I totally get it! THank you so much for taking the time to leave such an awesomely long review. it means a lot and I'm really excited you like the story so much! I hope your workday is over soon and I wish you a great day :)


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