Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Secret Cupid! ♥ says:
Hello, and Happy Valentine's Day!! So sorry for arriving so late with you reviews. The weekend has been SO busy for me.

Anyways, I was so excited to see that you had this lovely little Jilly story updated! This first chapter was really good. A bit on the short side, but you still managed to capture so much about their personalities in such a short amount of time. I loved that about this!

It was super sweet seeing how awkward James was around her at first, and Lilly was very intelligent for noticing how nervous he was right away. But then, once they got to talking, the nerves seemed to go away and the two of them got along great. I loved their little banter back and forth. It is very like Lilly Evans to eavesdrop on the Marauder's conversations in class, lol! I loved it how James didn't even try to deny it once they were busted too, lol!

I have to admit, seeing Sirius & Peter working together was a nice refreshing twist from the norm. It's always interesting, reading marauder scenes with the two of them together, considering their upcoming futures. Most people would have probly had him down in the dungeons with Remus instead, but I'm glad you went with Peter.

It was also a pleasant surprise when Lilly went with it at the end. Of course, she had plenty of time to plan her reaction on the way down to the dungeon. So it was nice to see her cut the boys some slack for a change. She's usually a rule-abider, as we all know, but it is nice to see her playful side every once in a while. I mean, she marries James Potter, so she can't possibly be 100% serious ALL the time, lol! ;)

Overall, this is off to a wonderful beginning, and I cannot wait to see what the next chapter brigs us!! Well done!!

XOXO ~ Cupid ♥

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 682
Submit Report: