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I feel like Seth is one of those people that has chink in her armor and you just have to find it. Like she obviously doesn't open up to James or any of his friends and I love Katie and Seth seems to tell her a lot but she still is very clear about not wanting to be a burden. I feel like Seth's the type of person who would just completely open up with little kids. Like she grew up in an overbearing household and never really got a real childhood herself so if I little kid just approached her and started talking to her I think she'd be really sweet to them. Idk I kinda have this vision of like her parents are mad at her and have kicked her out so she's wandering around Diagon Alley all alone and then all of a sudden this little girl (maybe Teddy and Victoire's daughter) comes up the her and introduces herself and she just goes to sit with Seth and asks her why she's sad and Seth just loves little kids so she tells the girl how her family's mad at her because she doesn't want to marry a person she doesn't love and then the little girl is so confused because in her family of course you should be with someone you love. And then the little girl and Seth become friends until her Teddy and Vic come to get her and then the little girl tells her parents everything and it gets back to the rest of the Wotters. And that was a really long run on sentence/story about my wild imagination but I was just thinking that Seth has to has a soft spot somewhere. Anyway, you have a fantastic story going and I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Ahhh I haven't checked HPFF in forever and now I feel really bad for not responding sooner to your lovely review! I am so terribly sorry. I hope you can forgive me!

I'm so glad you like the story and I'm really excited about your theories! I do think you're right; Seth definitely has a chink in her armor... maybe she might open up to kids more easily? I haven't thought about this, yet.. I guess either she is terrified of children or she loves them :). But I really like this idea. You should write a stroy!!! It sounds like you have loads of great ideas that just have to be put down in writing... I would definitely read them!

I think that's a sweet idea - Victoire'S and Teddy's kid definitely wouldn't know anything about being pressured into marriage by outdated family standards... and I can see Seth letting her guard down with children... she really has a hard time trusting people... even with Katie it had taken her a while.

Anyways, I love your idea! And I love your review! I do hope you come back for the next chapter, even though I took so long to answer. Thank you so much! YOu're amazing.

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