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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello, love! ♥ Ah, I'm so sorry that it's taken me so long to get to reading and reviewing this - Christmas and New Year just turned out to be crazily busy and I've been snatching bits of time to spend on HPFF because I really want to be more active this year (and I'm procrastinating essays, which always helps :P).

This was such an interesting chapter! There's so much going on here that I loved. I really liked the way you opened it with Eloise being back at home for Christmas and the way that it feels so different being back with family when you've been away for a while. It's different since Eloise is still being taken care of at Hogwarts and she's with her friends, but I think you captured that sense of homecoming - and the way parents take care of you again - really well. I liked the Midgeon household as well.

The spell to help Vincent manage with his deafness is so clever! I don't know how you came up with it but I thought it was such a brilliant idea to include something like that - I've always really wondered what magical versions of medical aids would exist in the HP world and I always love reading about details like that. The explanation of how it worked, with the letters changing in size depending on the volume and proximity of the speaker, was so interesting! I could see how it'd get to be annoying for Vincent, though, if people are shouting or having a conversation that he doesn't want to be a part of. I kind of wonder whether or not he'll use that in the future, in the war... It could prove really useful but also dangerous too, if he does.

Your descriptions ♥ I loved the part when you described the snow crying. It's such a different image - so striking and unusual - and it really had an impact.

I felt so sorry for Eloise when she was talking about the work she does in the Hospital Wing. Of course, I think it's great that she's doing it and it's clearly something she enjoys and is good at, but even so, it's a lot for her to see and deal with. It's so horrible that so many young people are dealing with those problems, and the Carrows haven't even taken over yet - if she's still at Hogwarts next year, it'll surely just get worse.

Hmm, I'm so curious about what's going on with Cormac! He's so rude to her at the end of this chapter, which is just unacceptable and unless there's a good reason for it, I feel like it'll take quite a while for Eloise to forgive him (though she's a lot more forgiving than I am, I'm sure). My theories right now are that he might be jealous, or there could be something else going on? Something more serious, perhaps? I'm so intrigued - hopefully you get chance to write another chapter soon so I can find out!

This was a great chapter and I really loved reading it! ♥

Sian :)

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