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Review:Lobelia Sackville-Baggins says:
(is the asterisk showing? For some reason, the site deletes half the the asterisks, so it probably says "SHT")
(also, Happy New Year!)
BUT REALLY, SH'T (there, I'm using an apostrophe instead of an asterisk, so hopefully it does say "SHT" now.)
Did they really just make out in front of the entirety of upper-crust wizarding society?
Chorus: Yes, yes they did!!
Me: Oh sh-
Did the box just do it on its own, though? Normally it wouldn't move until you give it directions, right? Holiday feature? Or ill-timed malfunction? Either way, I'm starting to think that thing is distantly related to the TARDIS, what with the mind-of-its-own qualities it's been displaying.
Of COURSE James would take her to a seedy, bar. OF FREAKING COURSE. Because I suppose he thinks that she wouldn't feel out of place in her fancy gown, seeing as she was okay at the party in her pyjamas (and she really didn't seem to bothered by it, did she, except for that unwanted attention from drunken fools and the impracticality of all that fabric.)
Oh no. Is her family going to kick her out?! Before, I was talking about what would happen if she chose to run away, but this is a bit different, isn't it? At least then, it would be her choice and she might have some semblance of a plan. This way...well, she'd get no warning, would she? I hope they don't disown her. I'm imagining a very dramatic scene in my head right now where her grandmother rips that necklace off her and orders her away from the Woodleys, in front of everyone at the Ministry. Oh dear...I suppose Harry would feel partly responsible and tell her to come home with his family, wouldn't he? And Ginny would be like "???" and
I'm writing your story for you, aren't I? I'm sorry. I'll stop.
I actually do feel a bit bad for Asher, though. I wonder what it would look like if he did something (ANYTHING) that wasn't exactly what was expected of him -- somehow, I doubt he's ever done something like that.
Wow, this review got long, even for my standards! Better wrap it up.
Love you! And hurry back!

Author's Response: Nope. Asterisk is right in place :).
I'm so glad you liked it! Really. It means a lot.

The phone box was called down again; I guess someone was waiting to leave this way and it kind of took too long already ;). It might be realted to the TARDIS, though ...haha I like that idea :)

And don't worry about Seth! You're right, it doesn't look too good for her right now but she's strong and she'll deal. I do like the idea that James and his parents would take her in but she'd never go for it... she really doesn't like to be saved, especially by James :D

And I do feel bad for Asher too; he's so caught up in this world but he would not have been happy with Seth anyway. I mean, he thinks that she's pretty. That's it, really.

I LOVE SUPER LONG REVIEWS! Seriously, they make my day. And I love to hear your theories, it really motivates me to write on and get creative :) SO thank you so much! ANd I'll try not to take too long with the next chapter :)

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