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Review:jamessiriuspotterforevr says:
Oohkay, I normally don't leave you reviews and I don't even know why. Probably because, I read half of your story on the other site and half of it here. Does that make sense? Probably not. Eh.
I have to say though, that you've done a SPLENDID job with this story. It seems almost relatable. The expectations bit, the defying the family bit. This is sorta me but not in such a theatrical way of course.
All I want is her to pull a Gryffindor( which she isn't .-.) and confront her family instead of plainly accepting everything, which I THINK she's gonna do. Hopefully, James will help her through it as well.
And boy oh boy, I just love James. Thank merlin he finally grew up, somewhat. The scene in the telephone box? So hot. And the last line?

and I knew that I had managed what no one else had before me: I had publicly humiliated the probably proudest family in England.

^ SIMPLY BRILLIANT. Cant wait for the next update now 😂

Author's Response: Oh you, I'm blushing. :)

I'm so glad you did review! I really am. Reviews actually make my day :) I do understand though, with reading on two different sites :)

It's so great to hear that you can identify with Seth... I mean, sure, her family is a special piece of work but still... And James, well, what can I say... in a perfect world he'd be the knight in shiny armor but Seth doesn't really like to be rescued, so we'll see how that turns out :)

Glad you liked the kiss in the phone box ;) and I hope you'll be back for the next chapter! Thanks so much again for deciding to leave a review, it really means a lot to me!!!


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