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Review:AlexFan says:
Iím so sorry for taking so long with this review, I started reading this story a few weeks ago and I just never got to the end so I couldnít give you a proper review and I had to restart. That being said, I feel as if I need to get back into my Harry Potter knowledge here because there has been so much canon information coming forward and I havenít been caught up on any of it so this was quite the surprise for me.

Iíve never read a fanfiction like this before, focusing on the afterlife so it was really interesting to see what you did with it. I liked how in depth you went into the story and the different parts of the afterlife and how it all worked. I thought it would be perfectly realistic, I donít think I would picture the afterlife any less complicated than what you came up with in the story.

I thought the story flowed really well, despite the fact that the point of view changed quite a bit throughout the story. Iíve never really liked the whole point of view switching in a story before but Iíll admit that it worked really well with this. It showed two sides to the same story, but each point of view felt like a different story (if that makes sense). Both Cedric and Fred were telling the same story, and yet they both felt very different.

I personally had a little trouble keeping up with everything being mentioned, there was so much going on all at the same time that it felt like my mind was trying to go in multiple directions trying to keep track of everything, but again that was just me.

But anyway, I think you have a really interesting story here and I enjoyed reading it.

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