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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Merry Christmas. Here is a give for the Ravenclaw gift exchange.

This is super cute and an awesome concept as well. I had to giggle a little bit when Harry was a police officer.and that he was in a coffee shop.with doughnuts. Yes, kind of cliched, but hilarious. And him being a police officer...and now detective, is very comparable to him in the wizarding world.

And again, Ginny falls into a natural roll as being a reporter. Her personality suits this as she was never one to back down from a fight and I'm sure she would do everything she could to get a story.

Harry's awkwardness around girls really comes through here, what with brushing the crumbs off of himself and then his unintentionally suggestive comments and his blushing. Ginny, as usual, had to take control of the situation.

I saw one small error
"There were a few people he didn't recognize, and one he didn't." The last didn't should be did.

This is pretty cool and I will definitely pop back to see what other ideas you come up with. Its well written and I you have mirrored the wizarding world with the muggle world really well.

Jacqui

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