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Review:Seasons_Greetings says:
Hello Marshal,

Here with one of three surprises from trivia!

Since I already read the first chapter of this story, I was anxious to come back and see how things had progressed.

James seems to be having a hard time with his transformation into Remus and I can understand why. It must be exhausting to be a werewolf. The squalid living conditions certainly don't help matters. If both James and Remus survive, I really hope that James will make sure Remus has better living conditions.

Rhea was quite creepy and I was honestly horrified by her proposal. How could she be so cavalier about attacking a child? I'm happy that James held out because Remus would be horrified at the thought of James attacking a child under his name. I wonder what James will do to gain acceptance into the pack. It does sound like he doesn't have many options.

Well, I must be off to continue on my mission of spreading joy and love throughout HPFF, but before I go let me wish you happy holidays!

SG

Author's Response: Thanks so much SG! Sorry it took me a while to get back to you on your review. I've been so busy as of late but I have loved all the lovely surprised you have dropped off for me!

I'm glad you liked the second chapter and it makes me giddy that you found Rhea to be a bit creepy and terrifying! It was kind of what I was going with for her. I wanted her to be caviler about attacking people much like Grey Back but more controlled. So I count it a success that she came across correctly!

I'm glad you enjoyed the read and thanks for the review!


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