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Review:Maya says:
I absolutely loved the George bits of him provoking Harry and the stuff he saud about what Molly Weasley saud about being the most proud of Ginny :) I was laughing out loud on the train :) sooo good :)

I also loved how you 'magically' solved the whole contraceptive thing.
Im still debating about the asexual Charlie thing. I mean, I guess it would have been appriached eventually but sometimes its ok to leave a chatacter on its own. Like those brothers or sisters on old tv shows that went on for so long that the writers just made them disappear due to lack of plot for them. No need to kill him of course, but you know... But either way I think what you did do was nice.

One thing im lacking is some romance between Ron and Hermione. I think he has the ability if being more than a teenager emotinally speaking :)

Keep up the good work! Im almost done with the episodes that have been written anf I fret reaching the untimely end. But something to look forward to is a good thing I guess. Yay! :)

Author's Response: Haha, I'm so happy you enjoyed George's comments - I had so much fun coming up with them so that's so great to hear!

Thank you so much for sharing your opinion on Charlie! I definitely see what you mean, I think I'm a little too in love with all the Weasleys to leave any of them out though ;) Also, I think there's not nearly enough representation of other sexual orientations than straight/gay/bi in writing and movies etc., and this was my (very) small contribution to that!

Ron is definitely growing in the emotional field! I'll keep that in mind for future chapters.

I am so happy you have made it this far, and that you're still enjoying it! Thank you so much for this very helpful review, I loved getting to hear your thoughts on all these things! And thank you for reading the story as well, it makes me so very happy!! Xx


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