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Review:reallifeginny says:
I really like Patrick Wren better than before but he still is a little silly. would you mind terribly to smarten up a bit more and give him more space in the story? but I want the brothers to bond little more, Please.

Author's Response: Patrick is a rambunctious eleven year old, right now. He's more like their dad, while Liam is more like their mom. There is great love between the brothers, I think, but they are too cool and tough to show it. Very much like Harry and Ron love one another without giving hugs, etc., like girls are able to do.

Patrick wants to be be like Liam, or rather, how he has imagined Liam to be these last two years, wooing girls and getting into fights with Slytherin boys. Now that he's at Hogwarts, he's bursting at the seams to prove that he's as tough as his brother, and Dennison is on the wrong end of that.

I don't have much planned for Patrick right now other than being a comic foil for Liam, and a rival for Aiden and Dennison. I can foresee a summertime scene in which the Wren brothers are hanging out together and run into someone else from Hogwarts, but that won't be in this book.

The focus of L&A is about to shift towards Philip and Rhiannon, and healing the rift between Tess and Morwena. Then, it will shift again, back to Liam and Sadie. I'll see if I can work in another scene with the two brothers, maybe at Christmastime.

Thanks for the comment! I don't get very many. And, thanks always for reading my work. I really appreciate it.

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