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Review:inevitable_bliss says:
I'd never really liked Lilian, but I have to say, I never saw this coming. Perhaps that is a byproduct of not reading all of the chapters in tandem, like in a book. The characterization you employ, and the sin vs redemption theme is insanely well played.
Now I really want to go back and find that chapter where Selena fought with her father and reread it. I'm sure there was a lot of context I missed there.
Loving this story! Your writing is superb and I hope you will publish your own works soon, I'll be sure to read them. Been following this for over a year now, and plan on continuing until the end. Thank you!

Author's Response: Yeah, there's a reason this chapter is quite so chunky and doesn't ADVANCE the plot a great deal, while going over a lot of background. If this were a novel someone was reading all at once, I might not have gone over the past plot points in such detail, but I appreciated that some of these happened YEARS ago for readers.

Oblivion's themes have really written themselves. My original plans were, like, 'Scorpius comes back from the dead, hilarity ensues.' Sin, redemption, what you deserve, what you can live with, justice, punishment, consequences - that just came with the territory!

The chapter between Selena and her father would be interesting to go back to; I reread it myself lately. I say this because I didn't really PLAN that chapter, I just knew her father had to do SOMETHING considering his daughter had been abducted. But, knowing the background of her and her mother, the dynamic developed quite naturally and it does offer some serious insights.

I'm very glad you've been enjoying the story so far! I mean, I'll go on to write MORE once I'm done with the Stygian Trilogy (tackling Marauder era next!), but for now, the ride's not over.

Thanks for reviewing!

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