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Review:Jayna says:
Hello again! I'm back from the Childhood challenge! For right now I won't count this as one of your 3 prize reviews because I said I would review all chapters in the story, but as I have nearly 20 prize reviews to complete for that challenge and am swamped in real-life, that may be subject to change. As a side note, I promise I haven't forgotten about those prize reviews, my goal is to have them all completed before the end of the year. Anyway, I skimmed through my past reviews to get back in the feel for this story, and I'm hoping that will be enough for it to make sense to me.

So, to the review! I think that, as you said, this is definitely one of the less intense chapters, but an important one none the less. As I've said before, you guys do a wonderful job of getting the reader to empathize with the characters, and that holds true in this chapter as well. One thing I thought was especially good was how the Percy that is seen at the beginning of this section is quite similar to the one in the books. He thinks the prefects are more important than they are, he's a little bit pompous, and he has no problem taking control of the situation. However, throughout the chapter you turn him empathetic, caring, and willing to just let someone else take care of everything else for a change. The way you achieved this gradually and realistically made the chapter a whole lot more believable and better overall. In addition, I loved the little joke the twins made. It seemed perfectly in character that they lighten the mood with a little humor in the midst of a crisis. Overall, this was just a pleasure to read and I'm glad I saw that another chapter had been posted. I hope you guys continue with this story!

-Jayna

Author's Response: Don't stress out over the prize reviews; no rush unless you plan to disappear forever or something! And we understand how it goes; we hosted a challenge this summer for which we still owe almost a dozen assorted reviews for, saying to expect them by the end of the year and then start bugging us.

Anyway, glad you came back so late to read! I finally figured out the HPFF glitch on Georgina's computer and I think she is posting chapter 6 tonight. If nott I'll bug her.

Like Percy, I think we both have a hard time seeing a situation that needs help and not being able to do anything about it. (I, Freda definitely struggle with that.) but then I also like to brighten the mood when I can, so I appreciated that very much too.

Thanks!

--Freda


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