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Review:Musing says:
Heya Olivia!

Musing from the forums, here for the BvB review fest! I saw your post in the Ravenclaw Story Updates Thread and came 'hopping' here all the way from the forums! I can't help it. I just love Jily :P

This was a cute little one-shot. Lily's feelings for James have started changing. She has even started acknowledging the way James has changed and matured. The part where she deduces that James is nervous in her presence is adorable. I like the easy flowing conversation between them while they talk about their patrol duties.

Initially I thought that this story is similar to many others I have read (not that I am complaining, I can read the same Jily fluff over and over again :P ). You changed it all with the last sentence, of course. Your Lily is just not the perfect rule abiding girl most of the fan-fics make her out to be. Did I mention I find this version of Lily more real and canon-compliant? I mean James, being James, would not have given up his mischievous streak altogether and Lily still loved him. She needs to be a little fun-loving herself for that to happen.

Thanks for the lovely read! Looking forward to the upcoming four parts. The Jily fan in me requests for longer chapters! *gives puppy dog eyes*

-Emm ^_^

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