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Review:Peeves says:
Hou ar ye? Peeves here, spreading Halloween cheer.

You know, you could focus on the pranks instead of all this soppy romance... would be much more interesting for me.

Of course I'm also happy to read about my favourite pranksters after school, especially seeing them alive and happy. I know that it doesn't stay that way... and soon they are replaced by the Weasley twins ;)

It's good to see James and Lily together. That boy went through more trouble than she is worth for her. I wouldn't be surprised if he carried her through hell and back if she asked it of him.
Beautiful dialogue and nice description in here, your writing is really good. I may have to come back for something else soon.

I'm off now, being sneaky somewhere else.
lots to do - Halloween is near.

Author's Response: Awww thank you Peeves!! I know, more soppy stuff than pranks but that was what the song was like! I do enjoy the Marauders in their prankster mode too. And James really does love Lily!!!

And thank you, I sometimes struggle with descriptions so I'm very happy you liked it here!!

Happy Halloween ;)

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