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Review:Wolfman3 says:
You've really caught your stride recently with these stories - you've cut back on repetitive discriptions (early on in the series your use of wide smiling and sobbing was a little much) and your writing is being propelled by more compelling action, quidditch and auror life rather than petty and over dramatized soap opera like drama (the fire whiskey scene where Harry drowns his Ginny sorrows being an example of less compelling action). Your writing of teddy and victoires characters is especially good. This is definitely your best chapter yet and I look forward to reading more of your story!

Author's Response: Thank you, I am so happy you think so! I definitely feel that the earlier chapters are a bit weaker so it's really nice to hear you say that I've improved. I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter - thank you so much for sticking with the story even though you didn't particularly enjoy the beginning of it, and for taking the time to leave these comments! Xx

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