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Review:Northbound24 says:
An enjoyable read this one. The Andromda and Ted Tonks relationship is one which doesn't really get any context in canon bar the fact the two are Tonks' parents and Ted was muggle-born so the origins of their relationship is up for grabs in fanfic terms.

Ted's casual characterisation really contrasts the 'proper' way Andromda behaves because you easily imagine Ted as a humble lad who has next to no social graces with his swearing and making some kind-hearted fun at Andromda's expense.

The 'Whatcha' greeting was a fun little nod to canon. You can't imagine Tonks picking that verbal vic up from her mother can you really.

So an enjoyable little one-shot with some fun characterisation.

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I totally agree that they don't get enough mention in canon!
I was going for that contrast so I'm glad you got that! :)
I enjoyed making him similar to his daughter, thats definitely where she would have got it from :)

I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thanks for the swap! :D

Katie :)


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