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Review:Jayna says:
Hello again! Wow, this was exciting! Again, wonderful job on the imagery. It made the story come to life, especially in a chapter with a bit more action than the last. I liked seeing yet another side of Percy, the one that protected his brothers and always helped his mom. Another thing I really liked about this chapter was that the children all acted like children. To me at least, their actions and thought processes seemed totally realistic and feasible, and it was VERY interesting to get some context and backstory for how Percy turned out the way he did.

However, for me, once the twins ran into the pet shop it got a bit confusing. I understood in the end, but I had to re-read that section a couple of times. Of course, that might just be because it's 1 AM and I running on very little sleep. Anyway, this was a great chapter!

-Jayna

-Jayna

Author's Response: Good to see you again. Thank you so much for your kind compliments, and yes, we did love creating the relationships between the Weasley kids at a young age. Though this chapter originated in the Dark Turn challenge (make the prompt "Charlie Weasley discovers a new breed of dragon" and make it dark) but I think we managed to fit it in well.

Yes, I can see how it was confusing. That part was kind of rushed because 1. we were trying to limit the word count on this word-packed chapter, and 2. we were trying to represent how quickly it happened to Percy. But we'll try to keep that in mind for the future.

Thanks again for giving us a lovely review!
--Georgina


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