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Review:Lobelia Sackville-Baggins says:
*deep breath* think of noodles. chocolate. lilacs in the spring. a room full of huge books and an armchair and a fire...
Okay, I'm calm again.
But-but-but-WHY?! Oh, I'm so scared for Al. Please be okay! I gasped so loudly my mom came running.
And after all this time, James didn't know her name? James, we love you, but STEP UP YO' GAME, MAN! Sorry, I have no clue where that voice came from.
That kiss in the snow...I just LOVE the effect of snowflakes in dark hair. And I'm glad Seth was able to tell James what she was feeling -- I grieve for the miniature apple tree (that was hilarious, by the way.)
Hopefully, James will come clean about why he's been ignoring Seth. I suspect it has something to do with the rabid fangirls, but I'm scared. Oh, James.
Let's see, what else...Oh. F*CK. SAM CAME OUT. AND HECTOR...AND SETH PULLED A PROTECTIVE FRIEND THING...AND OH MY GOD. So that's out in the open. Oh, Sam...poor baby. Hector, you had BETTER set this right or I might just hop through the screen and put my fifteen years of martial arts training to good use!
And the confrontation with Harry was pure joy. It was awkward, and serious, and SO WELL DONE. I love how you make him so not-pushy, but so concerned at the same time. And I have a feeling he's going to be investigating some more -- he's definitely not going to let this rest.
Fate was hilarious. Oh, Fate. You weirdo.
All right, I'll see you next chapter. I CAN'T WAIT. PLEASE, PLEASE, COME BACK TO ME SOONER.
Love you!

Author's Response: He is not going to die. I promise.
That being said, THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR THIS AWESOME REVIEW! :) I was literally grinning like a complete idiot when I saw it, so thank you so much for that! And I hope you didn't scare your mum too much :D.

And yes, James is a git. He only ever called her Woodley or Lizzy (Even though she asked him not to) and never even considered asking what she would like to be called then. Also, it shows that he has never made an effort to meet her, or engage with her when her friends were around - she always had to come to him (party invitation, skipping school, tutoring, etc.). And I agre with that mysterious voice of yours, he really has to step up his game...

I'm so glad you liked the kiss - I really didn't want to make it too fluffy but still fluffy enough to be a nice read :) And snow is awesome in general, I'm a die-hard winter girl so I'm the only one who's excited that summer is over and the temperatures have started dropping :). And the miniature apple tree deserved a tribute. It just once again shows how Seth actually holds grudges.

And yes, Sam and Hector, it's finally out in the open and I absolutely agree that Hector could use a good hard kick, haha.

It was so much fun writing Harry Potter but also so mortifying since I really don't want to mess with Rowling's perfect creation. I tried to stay true to his character as much as I could, so your compliment means a lot to me!

Fate should get an own show.

Thank you so much for the review again and for always coming back for the next chapter and leaving me such amazingly awesome feedback. It really means a lot to me! You're brilliant!

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