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Review:BellaLestrange87 says:
This is for the Blue vs Bronze review battle!

(Quick thing I noticed: the chapter title says "Rose and Scorpus POV", not Scorpius.)

The beginning of this chapter was really intense. I'm glad Scorpius was able to fight his way out of it and protect Rose. Of course, we still have to ask how those Death Eaters managed to get past the St Mungo's wards and into Rose's room without anyone noticing. I think Stannous has some sort of connection inside the Ministry.

I'm really glad the hospital is playing it safe and won't be taking any chances with Rose's health. Hopefully she's able to peacefully recover, peacefully go home, peacefully give birth, peacefully live her life as a mother and wife, and Stannous will peacefull go to Azkaban forever. (I know that's probably not going to happen just like that, but I can hope!)

You're missing an ending quotation mark here - Im going to put two guards outside her door and a team of plainclothes Aurors at the end of that hallway.

Oh, I love Al's reaction to Harry's ordering them all back. It seems so awkward (not to read! My mental vision of that scene features Al being awkward.)

I really like Harry's proposal, as well as how you wrote it. You made it seem like Harry was trying to persuade Rose to temporarily abandon healing while she waited for Stannous to be captured. I'm very happy you didn't, and instead allowed Rose to do something fulfilling where she can still be safely protected. I also noticed that being in the Ministry of Magic, near the Aurors, means that she'll be right there if Stannous is ever brought in or decides to attack. Not sure if this is good or bad, but I'm sure it'll influence events eventually.

I loved the little reference to Hermione's elective choices in third year.

I think it's good that Scorpius won't have to do his SNAKE practical. That's one less thing he'll have to worry about.

This chapter is ending on a suspiciously happy note. What's going to go wrong next? (Loved it, by the way!)

~Olivia

Author's Response: Hi Olivia,

Thanks for pointing that out in the Chapter Title - I would've never noticed it and now it's all fixed.

Oh wow - I'm loving everyone's predictions for how Stannous is connected (he is indeed, but I'm pretty sure no one has completely guessed it yet).

Haha - Rose does deserve some peace, doesn't she? But I don't think I can give her *too* much. We need to get rid of Stannous, and that's not going to happen anytime soon ;)

Oh - thank you for noticing that typo, I'll fix those quotation marks right away.

Haha - Al is so awesome. He is a seriously "do not mess with me" Auror in his own right, but it's tough not to get overshadowed by Harry.

And thanks for your comments about Harry's proposal. He wants Rose to be safe, but also knows that she needs to feel useful. Healing is all she's ever wanted to do. And now she has the opportunity to use all her best talents. Eeep! I'm so glad it came off okay (and yes, I wanted to throw a little Hermione in there, too :D)

Haha... Ummm - nothing's wrong. Why would you ask? I definitely do NOT have anything horrible or unexpected happening next. Nope. Not me. \oo/

♥ Beth


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