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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

This is Gabbie from the forums with your review and it's great to be back. I was going to continue on with your novel but I saw this little gem and decided to give it a try. I like that it ties in a long with Kings and Queens of Hogwarts, but from a completely different perspective.

I never really read much about Andromeda and I tried to write a one-shot about her a while back but it never came together. I love here that you've given her some great personality and backstory, she seems to be fully developed and I like the differences between her and the two sisters. I was really impressed by the fact that you brought up the fact that Andromeda doesn't approve of her sister's beliefs but still loves them. I think that that's an important thing that people have to point out because those bonds don't necessarily die off easily. The darkness in Bellatrix and the cool acceptance that Narcissa have really highlight wasn't different about the three girls and the choices that they'll make.

I am really curious though to learn more about how that all happens. We know what will happen of course but I wonder what will motivate the girls in the future and what Andromeda will do in the end. Sirius is her favorite cousin and that calls to mind that she isn't in the "Black mold" like the rest, considering that Sirius turned his back on the family basically and has nothing to do with them. I wonder if we'll see him at some point? Regulus made an appearance, as did future Death Eater brothers but that's just going to nag me.

But Ted Tonks! What a delightfully wonderful gust of fresh air. He made me all fuzzy and warm, I really want to see how his relationship with Andromeda unflods. They seem like complete opposites so I'm curious to know more about them and how the family will react. :D

Much love,


Author's Response: Hey Gabbie! :D

I really want to play around with the idea of describing the war from everyone's point of view so it's not just bias! :)

I'm really glad that you liked my Andromeda, I think you're spot on with the sisters thing; she would have been so torn and probably quite inwardly torchered. It's definitely a heart vs mind situation. Yes! The sisters would have had a bond at some point and I think a lot of people forget that! I've chosen to start at the point where they are all started to go in their different paths.

I plan to do a lot more Black sisters in one shot form as well as in kings and queens so that we can really see their motivation for things, like why Narcissi turned her back, well Bellatrix became insane and why Andromeda eventually chose Ted :) We will definitely see some Sirius!

Aw I'm so glad you liked my version of Ted! I wanted him to be like that to show that Andromeda finally sees she's been living in this crazy world that doesn't make sense :') and actually Ted is the normal type of person she needs!

I'm so glad you liked this little one shot!

Katie :)

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