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Review:Frankie05 says:
Hey Nix,

I debated even reading this because of the challenge. It isn't even my ship and I hate to see it sink, but you did it so well!! Some days I like Draco/Harry relationships and you make me want to ship them so much more!

I like how you keep it in canon. They are crude to each other in the hallways, and it's before anything. Harry knows that he is a Death Eater and he still wants to be with him (be still my aching heart). You did a magnificent job with the breakup scene. Draco is so into Harry he gives into his desires but then tries to protect Harry from the pain he is going to be feeling the next day. IT really made me sad watching this unfold. I just want to scream at Draco " DUMBLEDORE WILL HELP YOU" and he and Harry could be happy, but alas - ship sinking.

I really like how you wrote this happening from Draco's perspective. WE feel his anguish and confusion. So well done with that. We see that there is more to him and he is protective over his mother and a bit cowardly in saving his own life. I like that you show that he feels unworthy of Harry's love (even though Harry in his goodness would love him anyway). This was done so well. I mean I'm crying( not real tears but heart tears), but it is so good :)

Thanks for letting me read and review. :)
Frankie

Author's Response: Hi! You totally should ship them more! Writing them has made me want to ship them more, too!

Yes, I like keeping my Drarry canon as well. There's so much more drama and risk there, and I honestly don't see Ron or Hermione being okay with their relationship. At least not at this moment in time. It is before anything. I'm supposed to write "anything" as a sequel and I think that's going to break my heart more than anything *sigh*.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought the breakup scene was written well. Draco has so much potential and so much depth to his personality, and I really wanted to showcase that in this story. He cares about Harry so much and knows what Harry has to go on to do, and Draco doesn't believe Harry or even Dumbledore can save him. But I mean, Draco's never exactly been fond of Dumbledore and he's terrified of Voldemort, so yes, sinkage is happening. I'm so glad you can feel his emotions though in the writing. And Harry is so good and kind in this and it's so heartbreaking considering the reader already knows what's going to happen. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story!

Thanks so much for reading it! And thanks for the offering of reviews, that was so kind of you!

xxNix


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