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Review:Frankie05 says:
Hey Sam,

I thought I'd give this little one shot some love. Having never read the companion to this piece, I think it does well as a stand alone. Obviously you wrote this to work with another work, but as I sit here, I'm not confused at all about what is going on.

I really enjoy how you set the whole tone of the story with the way the weather was outside. The rain hitting the glass looks like what it feels when tears fall. I thought it was very beautifully written. And in walks one of my favorite characters ever. luna is so kind and so genuine and sincere, and wise. She gets to Susan and tries (without needing to try) to cheer her up and make her see the way Susan sees now how Susan feels she should see based on society. I like that. It feels like underlying meaning (don't know if you were going for that but it definitely works here). Luna is so fantastic at breaking the societal norm and being herself and believing in others to be themselves too.

I like the confidence that Luna breathes into Susan and it gives me hope. This was so well written and it wasn't very long which is even more impressive!

I'll be back for more SAM :)

Have a happy Monday!

Author's Response: Hello Frankie!

Thank you so much for your generous review offer (and for being the first to review this story!)

This story definitely does stand on it's own, as it is set many years before its companion piece, and is meant to give a bit of background on Susan, who is a secondary character in WIGOWY.

Hehe, who doesn't love Luna? This is actually the first time I've written her, though she was one of my favorite characters for many years. I've seen her written out of character any times and didn't want to butcher her, hence the avoiding. However, once readers started telling me that Susan reminded them of Luna in WIGOWY, I had to give it a shot, and upped the ante by putting both characters in a room together.

I am really glad to hear that you thought I did a good job with this.

Thank you so much!


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