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Review:Frankie05 says:
Hey jayde,

I'd thought I'd pop by for a bit of a pick me up review. This chapter was so great? James is being such a snotty child it makes me laugh.

How stressful would it be to do shopping on the day the train leaves. Whoosh. I was stressed just thinking about it!

You did a magnificent job setting up the scene and having us walk through the day with the Potter family.

You seriously had me cracking up at James with the broom. I bet Harry was having serious flashbacks to his youth- not the temper tantrum but the general teenagery of life.

Go AL. Trying out for Quidditch! I love Harry's trash talk to James to have Als back but then the terrifying moment he thought he lost his child. I could only imagine the terror. You described it perfectly. Poor AL is just distracted- he missed everything that happened. And nothing is more embarrassing to a twelve year old than his parents. This was perfect. So precious. Keep the updates coming ;)

Hug you long time Jayde,
Frankie

Author's Response: Aww Frankie, thank you SO much! This is So kind of you, I just can't even! *Squishes*

Yes, it would definitely be stressful to go shopping on the day the train leaves!

I'm happy that I made you laugh, and that you think I set the scene up well!

Thank you SO much for all of your kind words and compliments, and for taking the time to leave this review!


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