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Review:Laura says:
It was a very nice chapter. I like the whole ice-skating thing. I absolutely adore Freddie. He is just so cool. What's wrong with James? And the moment with Harry... You pictured him and Slughorn just how I think they would act. Harry has definiately picked some tension up (unlike Slughorn). Is James a bit uncofortable around Seth? And poor Sam.
Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, Freddie is quite the charmer :) More than broody James anyway, haha. I'm also glad that I produced a fairly accurate Harry/Slughorn scene - there is always a certain reverence when writing about the golden trio...

And yes, James is definitely uncomfortable around Seth... we might not exactly know why for a bit, though :)

Thanks so much for reading and for the review, it's really amazing to get feedback :)

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