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Review:Frankie05 says:
Alec,

This was interesting. I think to get my bearings I need to head over to A Weasley Vacation but I followed along as best I could.

I can see you are confident in your writing and that's good! You always get better with confidence. I wonder if Draco is still the same Draco from canon, because he doesn't seem like the Draco we know. His thoughts are not congruent with Draco from the books and some of the writings, you used Amerian phrases such as "jerk". i'm not from the UK but I think jerk is a very commonly used word there. It's too American unless he's immersed himself in so much that he's picked up some of the slang (and I just missed that - sometimes I am not very observant ;)

I do like the story though, i was enraptured by it. Draco's loss of everything, friends, money, status, power, and now is all alone in American. It seems like bitter justice and I hate it. (Mostly because I love Draco).

At the end, the generosity of his coworkers were so kind, and so thoughtful. It made me happy that Draco had someone to spend time with on Christmas.

Keep up the good work, and you'll keep improving (we all are :)

Great!
Frankie

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