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Review:rosiful says:
I know this is a very popular (practically famous) pairing, but I honestly don't think I've ever read one before *hides in shame*

I'm not really a fan of this pairing, but that's just because I'm a bit narrow-minded and live off of cannon ficts, nothing against this story at all. In fact, I really enjoyed reading this! So much angst and drama and forbidden romance, if they're all as good as this, I can see why it's a popular ship! I was quite sad when you sunk it actually!

I really like how you wrote Draco and portrayed his thoughts and feelings. He is so afraid for his family and himself and he can see the sad truth that he and Harry can never work out and be together. He wants to protect him, but Harry doesn't understand that they can't go on. It's quite sad seeing him remain so optimistic when he doesn't know the real truth of Draco's mission and it would surely change a few things if he did! I can only imagine all the angst there would be the next day after the Astronomy Tower scene!

That ending though was really great and so powerful.
You did a really, really amazing job with the whole story as well, but the end two sentences really stand out!

This was brilliantly written, and so sad/heartbreaking!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for stopping by to check this out! And I'm so glad you enjoyed this story even if you normally don't like Drarry. I'm glad you were sad when I sunk them, lol. That sounds wrong, but that was my goal when writing this of course, since I had to sink them for this challenge.

I'm so glad you loved Draco's character. I really enjoyed writing him, he's such a conflicted character already on his own, and I think his love for Harry really builds on that. And Harry's just Harry, being his optimistic, trusting self. I feel like there is going to be so much angst in that scene... I mean, if you thought Harry attacking Snape was bad, I can't even imagine what I'm going to do when I write this scene with Harry.

I'm so glad you loved the last few lines. I really wanted to emphasize the lyrics I based this story off of in them, and really seal Draco's fate (per se) to the reader. And I'm glad that stands out.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this! It was definitely a nice surprise!


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